Title: BlueSG
According to the
BlueSG website, BlueSG offers smart and affordable access transportation to all
Singaporean.
In collaboration with
Bollore Group, Singapore signed a contract that supports public transport
policy, through the creation of alternative and eco-friendly transportation solutions
to a motorized vehicle.
BlueSG users will
have access to a network of 1,000 shared electric Bluecar vehicles, available 24/7,
around Singapore. Users do not need to return the car at the original place and
bear the expense of maintenance or insurance of own vehicle.
The Bluecar is an electric
automobile. It contains a revolutionary LMP battery that does not give out gases
and consumes no petrol or diesel. It includes high-tech features and on-board
computer that guides users throughout their journey thus making driving at ease as
well as informing them the condition of the car. BlueSG’s interface operating
system that helps to navigate and show informational or alert notifications.
Website: https://www.bluesg.com.sg/ (150 words)
Hi Amirah,
ReplyDeleteYour summary was very well written with a good command of English. It is also concise and straight to the point. The summary also contained interesting features of blueSG which I did not know about beforehand.
Thanks for the good read!
Regards,
Darren
Hi Darren
DeleteThank you for taking the time to read my post and find it interesting. :)
Cheers,
Amirah
Dear Amira,
ReplyDeleteWhile your product summary is neat, there are a few things that we think that can be improved on.
We were not sure if the product referred was a service provided by BlueSG or a vehicle. Although the benefits of the product were mentioned in the first paragraph, the background information seems to be too lengthy. It would be better to mention the functions of the product before the advantages that comes with it. Also, the functions could be explained clearer as it is briefly stated one after another in the paragraph itself.
Yours sincerely,
Ching Wei & Michelle